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it's a start

you pretty much got your melody, it is good, now just go and make a song wit it. make the saw you add on to the melody a different instrument that matches. turn up your kick alot to counter the treble. the clap could be turned up to. a good start.

jbarnett responds:

got a newer version up now check it out

hey bro

i've been checking out all your music and this one really struck home. I've been working on jazzy trance mixes, they are a really tight genre mash. this song is so unique! i really am loving the piano in the beginning. Chilled out electronic music is my forte right now so i am diggin this. this song is to fun to slow down with transitions in my opinion. i like the chilled out spontaniouseness (i just made a word). I think a would have busted this song into some crazy saw action at the end to climax the song but idk, it is great as is. i want to keep in contact wit you and maybe do a colab. so check out some of my stuff, it would be greatly appreciated. if there is one song i want you to check out it my the chilled out trance song called Blue Haven

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/253379

thanks bro, peace. - BK

merlin responds:

Thanks for the review! I had a lot of fun making this song. I struggled, in the beginning, deciding whether I wanted this to be a traditional song, with real instruments, or say to hell with it, and do what I do best, and synth the hell out of it. It's definitely an interesting mesh of music, and I've opened this song to finish it a few times, and I think it's just kind of hard to work with... I'm sure some day it will just click, and I'll steer it in a great direction. Thank you for your support, and for listening to all my stuff!

Regards,
Merlin

other remix is better

your better off alone was much more hardcore, this was more of light and dancy. i liked the in your face bass stomp or sawing me in half synths. This song would of been even more tight if you would of made a killer bass saw and a ripping melody saw. strong work, i really like your remixes so far, keep it up. peace bro - BK

oh ya and thanks for the review! if you feel like reviewing any of my other songs that would be great. thanks bro

ElectroLord99 responds:

yeah, i wasn't very creative with this song, hence the amount of time i spent on this song, my usual 'good' submitions take me at LEAST 3 hours, and usually span out to 8 to 24 hours, depending on how much i work on it XD
i did one that took me 24 hours once, but the power went out during that time... i HATED it... ugh...
thanks for the review tho :D
peace

strong work

i'm diggin the hardcore remix. also the lil synth solos throughout the song are great. the pads really move the song along, great layering, hard to make any better lol.

ElectroLord99 responds:

yeah, but i could have done alot better, i had no mastering in this song lol, i just added some minor reverb... i was gunna work more on it but i was so sleepy after 7 hours on WoW that night lol

slick

dude i love coldplay remixes and completely didn't know by the title. very good addition to an already awesome song, good idea. Hey i did a coldplay remix myself, check it out!
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/224171

only one tip

make a really kickin off beat bass synth and it would totally rock my socks off. This song needs to be pretty hardcore trance man. good remix so far it is definitely a great song to remix. Just it takes a lot of skill to remix the original because it is so awesome already. Good luck! and remember, HUGE OFFBEAT BASS SYNTH!

Sacrafan responds:

this will happen....
Remember, I didnt even add sfx in lol.
it WILL be better =3

good mix of sounds

everything fit very well like a package. the song was just to repetitive to get anywhere, i'm also pretty picky when it comes to trance. This song would be great for Backgrounds music to some video game. Because it is not distracting, sounds good, and is catchy. Good pick of instruments, good arrangement.

jxl180 responds:

Thanks for the review,
jxl180

good FX

This is definitely my favorite of all of your work, I'm glad you are making house and to the floor music. Really this song doesn't need anything to be good, it already is. I guest if i could add anything to this song it would be some type of synth solo or a crazy acid synth bouncing all around off beat. Strong work man. i gots lots ofs news musics fors yous alsos. stop by and check it out man

jxl180 responds:

Thank you for your review. I was thinking of making a solo or something but it will be hard for me lol. I'll give it a shot. I'll be sure to check your stuff out.

thank you,
jxl180

love your melodies

dude your melodies are great you just need to work on repetition, lol. sorry i say that so much, but if you work that out your music will soar to great heights. you should post your stuff in trance, you'd get better votes and more reviews for matching the right genre.

great tune

I think this song could have been your best if you would have change the main melody in the middle and brought back the original in the end. if you do this it will cut down your repetition.

I was a high school stud, but now that is gone and i am at Johnson County Community College. My life pretty much consists of chilling with my girl, friends, music, pizza boy, college student, and highest of all god. Check my tunage any time, peace!

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