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lol

good @#$% man

REMIX

if want to make a BA remix of this follow my tips man, trust me. I listen to alot of Dj Nate and Corn and Beans, they have vital elements you should copy for a remix of this song. 1. Take the beats per minute and put them us really high like aroung 160 - 180. 2. Cut out some of the biulds in the song and fill them with you final sound you made at 2:01. 3. Make some really Bright synth triplettes to flow above the moving sounds below. Do these thing and you got a sweet song. that's my review. hey check out corn and beans and Dj nate's song for an example of what i am talking about. - Bracksta, peace bro

deuce19 responds:

I listen to those two a lot. They definitely have the sound I would like to mimic. I will take your tips into account and see what I can create next! Thanks for the review.

- Deuce19

wow

i think it was very creative and original to do that to a piece of music. All this song needed was a heavy bass kick or beat to drive it. i am pissed at the people who bombed your score. this is really good!!!!!! ARRRRRGGGHHHH!!!!! @#$%ers!!! i yelled at them for you. made this alot harder of a remix like crank the distortion and volume. Good job Allie! - Bracksta

improvements

well i like the start alot, then the whole song sounded like the start. In other words, cut down on the repitition. like if you would have had some huge changes in tune or song then went back to the original tune the song would have been great. i really like the brief synth that enters at 2:34. you should put more of that harder synth in your next song.

jxl180 responds:

Thank you for the review.

I thought it might be too repetitive, but in my opinion it is better than veering off completely to another tune/beat, that I used to do (check out Heist). It, for some reason, took me a while to realize that trance pretty much sticks to the same beat throughout. My older songs were pretty much different beats and tunes put together. It didn't have any structure. So this time I tried to make sure it had the same tune/beat throughout, and this caused the repetition. I will try again today or whenever i have time for a new song, and I will use your suggestions.

Thank you very much,
jxl180

hey, it's me agian

i like the other song better, it had a much better tune. Mira's voice is beautiful, tell her that for me. Good job guys. if only i new russian, lol. - Bracksta, peace

Xtreminal responds:

There is always time to practice it. I speak fluent 4 languages, then why don't u?

Yeah, I understand not everybody may not like the tune but this is music and everybody got different taste.

Thanks a lot for your comment anyway

good stuff

i like the song alot and i think i would like it more if i could understand Russian, lol. So good work i think, lol. russian rap sounds cool. - Bracksta

Xtreminal responds:

Practice a lot and u will learn it. Russian isn't so easy language but u can do it. Key factor is how much u are giving the effort.

very good start

NOW JUST FINISH THE SONG, SO I CAN LISTEN TO ALL OF IT. no rush though, lol.
- Bracksta, peace G

yo, great song

ya i first skimmed through the song then i listened to the whole song. It was very skillfully made. i enjoyed it. I only have one small complaint the that made this a 9/10. This is more dance music that techno. it has a dance beat with a techno feat, but overall it should be in the dance catagory. GOOD STUFF MAN. - Bracksta , peace

Good Intro

It was a very classic intro to a cd. it reminded me of a linking park intro. for a title, find a different word for birth or beggining like, awakening. Hey that is good, lol. Dude use Awakening for the title that would be sweet. - Bracksta, peace bro

metallikid6 responds:

Thanks so much for your review. It means a lot to me. Hmm... Awakening huh? That could inspire me for future songs I may write. =]
- MLC

hey buddy

yo, you reviewed one of my songs and i followed the your user link to your home page and I read your message up top about how you were angry at the users of newgrounds who smashed your song. Well, you aren't the only person who is pissed about injustice to good songs. So I'll be true and truthful.

Plus:
Ok, your song's initial sound is really good, especially when the soft snyth comes in at 1.06. The soft hip hop beats with the pads is really soothing and matches very well. The song transitions very smoothly. So this song has some gold elements in it.

Minus:
I think the main reason people shot your song down, after listening to the whole thing, is that it needs to change more. For example, in the middle of the song stop everything and have a sweet slow synth solo that has nothing to do with the chorus. Then smoothly flow back to the original sound. The key is keeping peoples attention. No matter how awesome a song is, if it doesn't have alot of changes and movement, people bomb it.

Overview: Make a remix of this song, make it less repetitive, be spontanious in a smooth way to fit the sytle of the song. If the votes don't change after you do this, screw the users who killed an awesome song.

Till next time, peace bro -Bracksta

ScratchBatteryMusic responds:

Wow,

Thank you so much for the detailed review. I love getting nice little tips from the people on here that actually know what they're talking about. I'll have to bear your advice in mind for my next song. I'm just trying to progress slowly as to not show people my "learning" phases in music. If you get what I mean.

Thanks again!!

I was a high school stud, but now that is gone and i am at Johnson County Community College. My life pretty much consists of chilling with my girl, friends, music, pizza boy, college student, and highest of all god. Check my tunage any time, peace!

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Baldwin City, KS

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